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Writing a literature essay

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At GCSE you will write essays about the texts you study. A strong essay has a clear argument, short embedded quotations, close analysis and precise terminology. You can start building these habits now.

A clear argument

Start with a thesis: a one-sentence answer to the question.
Question: 'How does Shakespeare present conflict in Romeo and Juliet?'
Thesis: 'Shakespeare presents conflict as a destructive force that spreads from the old feud into the lives of the young.'

Analytical paragraphs

Try What, How, Why:
What is the writer showing? (your point)
How do they show it? (a short quotation and a method)
Why? (the effect on the audience and the writer's purpose)
Zoom in on single words, and use tentative language: 'this suggests', 'this could imply', 'perhaps'.

Embedding quotations

Do not drop in long quotations on their own. Weave short ones into your sentence:
'Tybalt links peace with hell, saying he hates 'the word' peace 'As I hate hell', which suggests that for him, violence is natural.'
Use the present tense: 'Shakespeare shows...', not 'showed'.
Worked example

Write a What, How, Why paragraph opener about Tybalt.

  1. What: Tybalt is presented as full of hatred.
  2. How: he links peace with hell: 'I hate the word, / As I hate hell'.
  3. Why: the repeated 'hate' suggests his violence drives the tragedy.

Answer: Shakespeare presents Tybalt as consumed by hatred. When he declares 'I hate the word, / As I hate hell', the repetition of 'hate' suggests that his violence will drive the tragedy forward.

Key idea

Begin with a thesis. Build paragraphs with What, How, Why. Embed short quotations, zoom in on words, use tentative language and the present tense, and name methods precisely.

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