Neutral Tones by Thomas Hardy: context, form and key methods

A speaker remembers a winter day by a pond when he knew a love affair was dead. The memory still haunts him.

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Context and Hardy's purpose

Written in 1867 and published in Wessex Poems (1898). Hardy was a novelist and poet whose work is often pessimistic, showing people at the mercy of fate.
The poem may draw on a failed relationship from Hardy's youth. It shows how the end of love can drain all colour and meaning from the world.

Form and structure

Four quatrains with an ABBA rhyme scheme. The enclosed rhyme can suggest the speaker trapped in his memory.
Stanzas one to three describe the day by the pond. Stanza four jumps forward: since then, every betrayal in love has reminded him of that scene.
Cyclical structure: the final lines bring back the sun, the tree, the pond and the grey leaves from the opening.

Language and key methods

Pathetic fallacy: "We stood by a pond that winter day, / And the sun was white, as though chidden of God". Even the sun seems drained and punished.
Oxymoron: "The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing / Alive enough to have strength to die". The smile is bitter and lifeless.
Colour: the 'neutral tones' of white and grey show a relationship with no warmth. The ending, "And a pond edged with grayish leaves", leaves us in this dull, cold world.
Worked example

Compare how the end of love is presented in Neutral Tones and One Flesh.

  1. Both poems show love that has lost its warmth.
  2. Hardy's winter imagery and oxymoron; Jennings's images of separation.
  3. AO3: Hardy's pessimism; Jennings writing about her parents in old age.

Answer: Hardy and Jennings both present relationships that have lost their passion, but with different feelings. Hardy's oxymoron, "the deadest thing / Alive enough to have strength to die", describes a bitter smile and shows love actively dying, while the white sun and "grayish leaves" create a cold, colourless world. Jennings watches her elderly parents lying apart, and although their passion has faded, she still sees a bond between them. Hardy's tone is bitter and personal, shaped by his pessimistic view of fate, whereas Jennings is puzzled and tender. Hardy's love ends in betrayal; Jennings's fades but endures.

Key idea

Written 1867, published 1898; Hardy's pessimism. Four ABBA quatrains; cyclical structure. Pathetic fallacy (white sun, winter pond); oxymoron of the dying smile; neutral colours; "grayish leaves".

Key words
Context
The circumstances in which a text was written and set, such as historical events, social attitudes and the writer's life (AO3 in the GCSE, AO4 in the International GCSE).
Form
The type and shape of a text: for example sonnet, ballad, free verse, tragedy, comedy, novel or play.
Speaker
The voice of a poem. The speaker is not always the poet.
Structure
How a text is organised and develops: its order, shifts, turning points, openings and endings.
Pathetic fallacy
Using weather or setting to reflect a character's mood or the atmosphere.
Oxymoron
Two contradictory words placed together, such as 'loving hate'.

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