GCSE-readyA Christmas Carol: narrative voice and key passages
A Christmas Carol has a chatty, playful narrator, five 'staves' like a song, and some of Dickens's most famous lists and images. Use them to write precisely about any extract.
Narrator and structure
Five staves: a 'stave' is a verse of a song, fitting the title 'Carol'. The structure is Marley, then the Ghosts of Christmas Past, Present and Yet to Come, then Scrooge transformed.
Cyclical change: Scrooge's words come back to him ("Are there no prisons?"), and the cold opening is mirrored by the warm ending.
Allegory and moral purpose: published in 1843, it is a story with a clear lesson about social responsibility.
Key passages
| Moment | Quotation | Method and effect |
|---|---|---|
| Scrooge introduced (Stave 1) | "squeezing, wrenching, grasping, scraping, clutching, covetous, old sinner!" | Asyndetic list of harsh -ing words and adjectives: his greed |
| Scrooge introduced (Stave 1) | "solitary as an oyster" | Simile: closed, hard and alone |
| Charity collectors (Stave 1) | "Are there no prisons?" | Rhetorical questions show his cruelty |
| Ignorance and Want (Stave 3) | "This boy is Ignorance. This girl is Want." | Allegorical children: a warning to society |
| The graveyard (Stave 4) | "I will honour Christmas in my heart, and try to keep it all the year." | Scrooge's promise of change |
| Christmas morning (Stave 5) | "I am as light as a feather, I am as happy as an angel, I am as merry as a schoolboy." | Repeated similes: joyful transformation |
Practice: analysing an extract
Oh! But he was a tight-fisted hand at the grind-stone, Scrooge! a squeezing, wrenching, grasping, scraping, clutching, covetous, old sinner! Hard and sharp as flint, from which no steel had ever struck out generous fire; secret, and self-contained, and solitary as an oyster.
How does Dickens present Scrooge in this extract?
- A long list of -ing words, 'squeezing, wrenching, grasping', builds a picture of greed.
- 'Hard and sharp as flint' and 'solitary as an oyster' are similes of coldness and isolation.
- The exclamations and the narrator's lively voice make Scrooge almost comic but clearly sinful ('old sinner').
Answer: Dickens piles up harsh -ing words to show Scrooge's greed, then uses similes of flint and an oyster to show he is cold, hard and isolated, while the narrator's exclamations make him a vivid, almost comic villain.
A chatty narrator, five staves like a carol, and a cyclical structure where Scrooge's words return to him. Key passages: Scrooge's introduction (list and similes), 'Are there no prisons?', Ignorance and Want, his graveyard promise and his joyful Christmas morning.
- Narrative voice
- The personality and viewpoint of the narrator who tells the story.
- Structure
- How a text is organised and develops: its order, shifts, turning points, openings and endings.
- Allegory
- A story in which characters and events stand for something else, often political or moral. Animal Farm is an allegory of the Russian Revolution.
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How does A Christmas Carol open?
- 'Bah! Humbug!'
- 'God bless Us, Every One!'
- 'Reader, I married him.'
- 'Marley was dead: to begin with.'
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Answer: 'Marley was dead: to begin with.'
The narrator speaks directly and wittily.
How many staves are in A Christmas Carol?
- Three
- Five
- Seven
- Twelve
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Answer: Five
Five staves.
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